Thursday, 26 August 2021

hyperbole

 I ran like the flash to catch the train but my bag weighs a tone.  I got on the train and waited  10 years .

I got so   hungry i could  eat a horse, when i got off i Said what a world. 

So did you like my story do you use  hyperbole? 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bryce
    Good job with writing your hyperboles, don't forget to check your punctuation before you publish your post. I liked your hyperbole 'my bag weighed a ton'. Great work on posting on your blog Bryce, keep it up!
    Sarah

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