I ran like the flash to catch the train but my bag weighs a tone. I got on the train and waited 10 years .
I got so hungry i could eat a horse, when i got off i Said what a world.
So did you like my story do you use hyperbole?
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I ran like the flash to catch the train but my bag weighs a tone. I got on the train and waited 10 years .
I got so hungry i could eat a horse, when i got off i Said what a world.
So did you like my story do you use hyperbole?
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Hi Bryce
ReplyDeleteGood job with writing your hyperboles, don't forget to check your punctuation before you publish your post. I liked your hyperbole 'my bag weighed a ton'. Great work on posting on your blog Bryce, keep it up!
Sarah