Hi i'm Bryce i was walking being bored so so i played with Perry the platypus and planted some paper then we prased all the way home. so what do you tink i made this for school and ya have you made one before
Tuesday, 24 August 2021
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Hi Bryce, great use of alliteration, well done! Next time please read over your post before publishing and check your spelling. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
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hi Bryce how are you that is relay good alliteration and riming
ReplyDeletethis reminds me of poetry and just to remind you you wrote i instead of I