comic

 this is my comic so it is dark and scerey

cool hotn spot

 

meep

 So i was in the backyard i was pick up by some big hands hand know i am in this car and know it is so nose 

The is some little people with me it is a world of stink and so that is my story of a meep/sheep

saints

WALT we are learning about saints Francis Xavier

whats your favourite saint  

rubbish

 walt look after our inventive 

it woes so gorse

it woes so gorse be cos i had to pick up rubbish 

and ween we were done we went to Thompson park

will you go pick up rubbish?

recycle

 

so i had to take a photo of the rubbish and see how it made me fell normal and it woes disco Stan but now i now to recycle.

  

holiday

Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?

Who? me What? Holiday  Where? Home  When? holiday Starting question? Did you have a fun holiday

BODY: Describe what happened.

Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences) What happened first? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

I stayed home and whach you tube on my phone

Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

And went to the PARK and played with my baby  sister and she cried because mum said to go home

Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

We stayed home and it was hot  but fun. but i had to have my cast on did you have a fun holiday

Conclusion (Summary) Summarise all of the main points of your recount do not add in any new details.