Thursday, 15 October 2020

holiday


Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?

Who? me

What? Holiday 

Where? Home 

When? holiday

Starting question? Did you have a fun holiday 

BODY: Describe what happened.

Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences) What happened first? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)

I stayed home and whach you tube on my phone  


Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)


And went to the PARK and played with my baby  sister and she cried because mum said to go home 

Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph)


We stayed home and it was hot  but fun. but i had to have my cast on did you have a fun holiday 


Conclusion (Summary) Summarise all of the main points of your recount do not add in any new details. 

 

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