Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 30 October 2020
Friday, 16 October 2020
rubbish
walt look after our inventive
it woes so gorse
it woes so gorse be cos i had to pick up rubbish
and ween we were done we went to Thompson park
will you go pick up rubbish?
recycle
so i had to take a photo of the rubbish and see how it made me fell normal and it woes disco Stan but now i now to recycle.
Thursday, 15 October 2020
holiday
Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader? | ||
Who? me What? Holiday Where? Home When? holiday Starting question? Did you have a fun holiday | ||
BODY: Describe what happened. | ||
Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences) What happened first? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph) | ||
I stayed home and whach you tube on my phone | ||
Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph) | ||
And went to the PARK and played with my baby sister and she cried because mum said to go home | ||
Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences) What happened next? Describe this in detail. (Have one idea only in this paragraph) | ||
We stayed home and it was hot but fun. but i had to have my cast on did you have a fun holiday | ||
Conclusion (Summary) Summarise all of the main points of your recount do not add in any new details. |