Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 4 May 2020
This is a poem about my step mum Rebecca
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Hi Bryce, what a wonderful poem you have written. It reminds me of when I used to write poems and cards for my Mum when I was at school. Are you going to make a card with this poem on it for your Step Mum? I think she would love it.
ReplyDeleteHi Bryce
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely acrostic poem. It sounds like your step mum is a very kind person....I hope you're going to spoil her on Mothers Day.
Sarah