Thursday, 26 March 2020

THE TEMPLE OF OLD MIRROR DOOR


Bryce  26/03/20                           THE TEMPLE OF OLD MIRROR DOOR
 As I was walking though a forbidden  forest , I accidentally  stumbled upon a strange old  mirror door . What is behind this door I wondered ? I tried to call it in on my radio but no one spoke , was I all alone ? I opened the door to find a whole different world , with green old  murky water and vines growing all around. I heard the old door slam shut !! Am I now separated from the outside world ?
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3 comments:

  1. Nick Gray26 March 2020 at 12:40

    Hi Bryce. This is a great picture to choose. Very mysterious. I would love to hear what happens next. I wonder how the character was feeling.

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    1. Anonymous26 March 2020 at 13:45

      hey Mr Gray could you please make it harder for me and add in some more words to use

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  2. Mrs Judkins15 April 2020 at 09:31

    Hi Bryce. I love the picture you have chosen. It reminds me of a scene from Lord Of The Rings. Are you going to write more of the story?
    Mrs Judkins

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